Grey or Gray?

I have found the answer to your problems regarding the spelling of this troubling color. Thanks #Tumblr and #Pintrest!

Too Many Characters

It is always best to ease characters into your book rather than throwing them in all at once. NEVER introduce more than (arguably) three characters at a time. And that is AFTER you have established your MAIN character. I have made this mistake over and over, even within the same novel. While I wish I could offer a trick to fix this, it is merely a process that I have worked on through writing and editing time and time again.